Volume 17 Page 31
Jun03
on June 3, 2014
at 8:33 pm
I had a whole sub-plot about Darumatha’s secret police that got scrapped due to time and pacing constraints. As I close in on the end of WPK I’m more and more amazed by how much stuff I sliced out of the narrative.
That’s not necessarily a bad thing: Your story is already somewhat long and complicated without a lot of those kind of side-detail digressions added. It would help with making Darumatha look less like an annoying, dumbass chump and more of a strategic player who is actually a threat though; the protagonists surviving multiple confrontations with him makes him look weak.
Your designs never cease to amaze me, whether its wings, magic items, races of beings, or dragons. And I think the recap you do at the beginning of every story is just enough to catch folks up who miss ::gasp:: a page or three.