I’m rereading, and this entire chapter is particularly well-written in terms of dialogue and interactions. Vax shines here, and its just fun. You do a good job of showing us more about the Kepteriad in a short time and without getting bogged down in details. On a different note, I also love Corva’s and Vish’s outfits on this page. The coat and hat ensemble Vish has on might be his coolest look in WPK. Also Also, I’m happy for Arcoan. The poor guy’s days of fearing hungry cats appear to be behind him.
I’m rereading, and this entire chapter is particularly well-written in terms of dialogue and interactions. Vax shines here, and its just fun. You do a good job of showing us more about the Kepteriad in a short time and without getting bogged down in details. On a different note, I also love Corva’s and Vish’s outfits on this page. The coat and hat ensemble Vish has on might be his coolest look in WPK. Also Also, I’m happy for Arcoan. The poor guy’s days of fearing hungry cats appear to be behind him.