This page…actually turned out pretty okay. Normally I terrifically botch the perspective or the anatomy or something somewhere really obvious, but this page looks mostly-alright. I’m also glad I took the added effort to add texture. I don’t…actually have any idea what I’m doing when I add texture, but it prevents the pages from looking like I colored them in MS-Paint.
Roughly 3/4 of the dialogue on this page is made up of actual or potential torch song lyrics.
That desire to understand the horizon of comprehension isn’t something I had expected in Anthem before, but it seems to make the most perfect sense, now.
Good effect on panel 2, in which everyone is either relieved or comic relief, but she’s just pissed. It looks like she’s just wincing from pain until one reads on.