Water effects are tricky, but every time I have to draw water, I get a little bit better. Though right now I’m actually thinking about my choice of typeface, and I’m not entirely happy with it. One reader already (correctly) pointed out that “y.” constructions look like an “x,” and the more I look, the more I think “p’s” look kind of like “d’s.”

In more exciting news, I’m polishing the script for chapter 10, and there’s some great stuff in store.