I’m realizing, in retrospect, that I should have had them traveling right-to-left instead of left-to-right, since Anthem rides sidesaddle and from this direction you mostly see her back.
Also, this is the sort of emotional content that really needs hands, not faces, to convey the subtext. Unfortunately I can’t draw hands or faces, so you get flying catfish.
Flying catfish can convey a surprising range of emotion.
I wish I had something useful or at least vaguely relevant to add, but it’s taking all of my effort to hold back a painfully corny comment about “fly fishing.” I think I need sleep. Meanwhile, keep up the good work because I’m quite interested in which direction(s) the story goes from here.
Love the scenes!