Yes, this took me way too long. And it still ended up muddy; apparently “clear outlines” and “people who ride zebras” are incompatible.

Anyway, one of my goals for this page, and really for all pages, but it’s very difficult, is to provide a lot of “storytelling” in the art. It’s easy to leave characters who aren’t talking frozen in place like bad actors waiting for a prompt. That’s something I need to avoid, since you can tell so much with just a bit of pantomime.