Not thrilled with the scripting on this page; lots of names and backstory stuff; not enough forward momentum. Artistically, Corinno looks good on this page–Corinno is pretty swell, in general–but nothing else quite came together. Nammathar doesn’t look particularly distinctive, we don’t see much more of Kebra’s entertainment room, and Barabbon looks like a mall Santa waiting for the next kid to show up. Still, I’m happy to re-grow my buffer. If you haven’t drawn a webcomic, it’s tough to explain the qualitative difference in contentedness between “I have a buffer” and “I have no buffer,” but it’s there.
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