I really hope there aren’t too many things terrible wrong with this page, because I’ve stared at it for way too long and can’t really look at it anymore. This was definitely the upper limit of what I’m able to draw. I was going for a Wayne Reynolds-style “wall of action,” especially in the first panel, but I can only draw things so clearly. I hope what’s going on is at least kind of clear.
Next chapter, I’m going to make a note to draw more close-ups of faces. This is killing me, man.
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