Pretty happy. I officially have a one-week buffer again, as of finishing this page. I’d love to get back up to two weeks, which is what I started with way back whenever I began this madness.
Also, pretty happy with Vish’s telekinetic effect. I think I’ll stick with that one for “Vish magic.” Coming up with stylized stuff is really outside my competency zone.
(Though I do recall Vish warning Anthem about echoes. This is what happens when you throw around too much power: you fall into a lightbulb and get stuck.)
The movement on this page is okay but not great. That Gilgam’s knife literally sticks into his ropes was hard to convey with the space available, and Anthem looks a bit stiff, but for the most part, everyone is standing properly related to everyone else.
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